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    Re: Her new high

    Well I feel like you get your point across a little better, and it seems sooo much more you when your humorous in your poetry. Keep up the fantastic work. Much love.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    I applaud ur work, man, I don' visit the poems section much; but I often find myself; when I have the time; lookin' for ur work. I enjoyed this particular poem the best. I liked the how it starts off, then when it gets ta the 4th quatrain; it's like it gets a shot of adrenaline. Impressive, bravo; my man!

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    Re: Her new high

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Mage View Post
    I applaud ur work, man, I don' visit the poems section much; but I often find myself; when I have the time; lookin' for ur work. I enjoyed this particular poem the best. I liked the how it starts off, then when it gets ta the 4th quatrain; it's like it gets a shot of adrenaline. Impressive, bravo; my man!
    Hey, thanks! It's an honor to know that when you visit the poem section that I'm the author you look for. ^_^ I never really noticed how the poem gets more exciting at the 4th stanza until you mentioned it, LOL. I re-read this and was like, "Wow! That's friggin' great!"

    Thanks for takin' the time to read my work, Mr. Mage! I appreciate it!


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