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    Her Song of a River Heart

    On the side of a riverbank
    I am crying my heart out
    Waiting for someone to hold
    No, but to carry me back

    And there you came to hold my hand
    Patting my back to clam down
    It is to ease the pain inside
    Slowly, my crumbled heart heals

    I stared to your gentle eyes
    And youhappily smiled back
    I was so gladly tranced by your smile
    What is this strange feeling inside?

    And then you carried me, I was-
    I was so shocked by what you did
    You said that I was too tired
    All I felt,such happiness

    We are chattering while you held
    Me in your back that I'm glad
    I feel so light while in your back
    We are constantly sharing

    What is this so strange feeling?
    Inside that slowly healed my heart?
    I don't want to know, I'm happy
    While you carry me down this roa
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Her Song of a River Heart

    That was pretty good. I could just feel the emotion there. It seems like, the people we love tend to be the very things that heal us, thats what ive gathered from your poem there. Kudos man.

    I couldnt help but read your sig too. Man, that bites. I know how it feels to lose someone like that, my BF died three years ago. With all the kindness and sincerity in my heart, may your GF rest in peace.

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Re: Her Song of a River Heart

    With all the kindness and sincerity in my heart, may your GF rest in peace.
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    Nah, my gf didn't die and above all, I don't have any gf at the time.I was inspired by song when I wrote this one.Sorry for the inconvenience...
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Her Song of a River Heart

    Its cool its cool. Very misleading sig though. lol

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Re: Her Song of a River Heart

    Its cool its cool. Very misleading sig though. lol
    The sig is made few years ago and thanks for your kind appreciation to my work ))
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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