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  1. Sep 18, 2008 07:07 AM #1
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    Here We Are

    Why do you tempt me with your prescence?
    Look upon me with that lustful gaze
    Then claim I am not your partner
    Til th end of our days

    You dealt with the blazing fire of my anger
    Faced the icey grip of my regret
    Yet here you stand before me
    Holding me, touching me, drawing me in

    I tried to shake these feelings
    This love and deep regret
    But here I am melting into you
    Letting you engulf me in your prescence

    Let me go, I BEG you
    Allow me to return to my lover
    One whom is the light of my life
    But yet and still here we are
    Together
    Dancing this fools dance

    We both know the truth
    Friends can not be lovers
    But here we are
    Here we are



    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
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    Re: Here We Are

    Pretty nice. My soul breathes a bit more wiith that words. Thank you.
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    Re: Here We Are

    Another thanks for me. Merci beaucoup. Keep up with your beautiful poems.
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  5. Sep 19, 2008 01:33 PM #4
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    Re: Here We Are

    Love can't always be seen the way we want to be. That's the reason some people say "love is blind." Anyway, I thought your poem was very touching and sensational.
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