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    Re: Here we go again

    Not to be incredibly vague, but I like the first two stanzas... they remind me of early matchbox 20 songs.

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    Re: Here we go again

    it was too damn quiet when I made this
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    ~Silence~

    as I sit here
    in the dark of my own mind
    the demons creep closer
    tightening their grip on my soul
    it feels like I'm getting ripped apart
    peice by peice

    as I sit here
    my eyes bleed
    and my flesh boils and melts away
    as I stare at my insides
    I realize its my fault
    that I'm like this
    a freakishly twisted
    form of a human body

    as I site here
    in the silence I know why
    I know why it all happened
    their blood is on my hands
    I can still smell it
    the death and destruction
    and it doesnt sicken me
    I'm used to it
    after all these years

    as I sit here
    I want to rip apart whats left of me
    I want to see the blood hit the ground
    but a promise is a promise
    I told her I'd never
    touch the blade again as did she

    as I sit here
    in the silence
    my heart slows
    my eyes close
    she rests her
    head on my chest
    and I die.....

    Created: Jan 7 2006, 12:29 AM


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    Re: Here we go again

    wow, that good, cant wait to read another

    Thank you sasuraihell for the sig

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    Re: Here we go again

    Dark and gloomy, I like these kinds of poem. Great poems. Post some more, Sir. ^_^

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    Re: Here we go again

    I hadn't noticed you wrote so much Zackraa O.O, a man hidden behind words of many meanings. That's a compliment coming from me so take it in or else send you charcoal instaed of this:

    *gives a super cookie to Zackraa for impressing many*
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    Re: Here we go again

    nice, and amazing. My favorite line "I'm trapped in a dream inside a dream
    as I sit in pool of my own life" I like it.

    And the one you wrote for you girlfriend was nice too.
    Last edited by Mr. K; Apr 07, 2006 at 07:49 PM.
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    Re: Here we go again

    hey...i like u....and ur poems

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    Re: Here we go again

    I actaully liked this one

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