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    Re: Here we go again

    i like them very much zack. great work. lookin forward 4 more!

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    Re: Here we go again

    You and Soldat are few of many people that I know, who cannot stop themselves from composing great poems so short in time. (^_^) Brilliant work, Zack! I love the one that you just wrote. Very touching and emotional. Keep it up, buddy! Hope to read more of your works.

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    Re: Here we go again

    Wow there great I like them some of them remind me of well me and how much pain there is in me and others
    your words r strong and they make me thinkalot about how painful life is and how I feel most of the time
    keep up the great work
    can't wait to see the others v_v

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    Re: Here we go again

    ~A life to lead~

    I just need her in my arms without her I shudder
    being the demon I am I have done things I still refrain
    leaving my hands stained with the blood of others
    of my doings I've done enough to deserve my pain
    guess I'll have her oneday someday far away

    I push her away everyday and these fears I fray
    my mind like a rope tight around my neck and it tears
    with the rape of my mind and the torture of my soul
    and my fears of women I shudder at the nightmares
    I crumbled as my body became a big black hole

    I fell apart into pieces irreversible damage to my mind
    beleiving I was lost laying there in a ditch of my hate
    she came along collecting the pieces she could find
    then bringing my puzzle together showing me my fate

    A vision of things I've never seen unlike any other dream
    my conscience was hidden away behind a hallucination
    she brought my mind to life being awakened I scream
    no longer the nightmare of dieing in silence and torn expression

    Giving me dreams of children and her beauty like fine wine
    getting better with age she still tastes just as sweet
    this idea of me dieing along side her to me is perfectly fine
    knowing hers and my ideas on an eye level we'll always meet

    I awaken to her voice wafting through my ears
    trying to move then feeling our bodies entwined
    to look at her eyes and think I missed her for years
    knowing a week had gone and nothing left to find
    I looked at her with my eyes brimming with tears
    she had cured him of his poison both body and mind

    I know it may sound corny with happy ends
    thinking I'd have the words to show her but I'm starting to cry
    trying to create my words to escape all the trends
    I think ..no wait I know she will be the one of whom with I die

    ♥ To my darling nicole I'm always with your soul ♥

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    I just finished writing this a few minutes ago it took me 2 hours or so


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    Re: Here we go again

    2 hrs!! :O omg... lol
    tis is the only one...tat's meaningful i guess....dedicated to ur luvly nicole..O_O
    very touching *sobs**sobs*
    8/10 ^^

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