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    He's paying.

    You wanted him to pay,
    Well now he is,
    For all those horrid things,
    That YOU did.

    All the screaming and crying.
    All the lying and denying.
    All the fighting and tears
    For too many years.

    A life set in ruine,
    But what do you care
    You sing your pained tune
    It's all completely fair!

    And now when he looks back,
    All he can see is darkness
    It's hard to get on track.
    When all you want is someone back.

    But now she's there with him,
    Because on a tempermental whim,
    She found her feet and ran
    From him,and you as fast as she can.

    She won't admit another mistake.
    No matter how much work it takes,
    She has to make herself whole again,
    He helps as much as he can.

    Heartach and strife,
    Pain and hopelessness
    Are all he takes from life,
    How can anyone take this?

    Blinded by our own selfish needs,
    We forget to do the good deeds,
    To take care of one another
    Insted of taking jabs at eachother.

    (This isn't about ANYONE, this isn't about my own situation at ALL, so if anyone ANYONE takes this personally they need to check themselves. It's JUST writing for gods sakes and it's not -my- voice. Just some person so don't get mad at -me-.)

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    Re: He's paying.

    Well, I'd better go and check myself then, LOL. ^_^ J/K.

    I like this poem, Chan. You did well. I hope to see more!
    I especially like how it's fiction based from fact--as much as you may not want to see it. ^_^


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    Re: He's paying.

    it was only based on a line, a sentance that kept playing through my head. It's not my fault the theme pertains to anyone. I've been trying to get those little "strings" out lately because I need to get better at writing...so yeah. THanka you.

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