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    Hexagon

    I haven't written in awhile so I hope you all enjoy this. ^-^


    A streak of light hits my left eye making glare a
    brilliant brown.

    the tentacles protruding from the small of my back
    take on lives of their own and create their own tales for me.

    The first one flips my mind through memories and
    past times, happier days.

    The second writes jibberish into a notebook
    and laughs at my anger.

    The third sits nestled on my left shoulder scolding me
    for all the wrong things I've accomplished.

    The fourth sits on my right shoulder telling me of all the gleeful misdeeds that would ever so delight me.

    The fifth tells me wryly the
    secrets of the people who pass by, I've laughed along with it many times.

    The sixth speaks to me of the
    future and what is to be of us all, including me.

    They claw their way into the folds of my brain
    taunting and helping me.

    I want to blue my being and find a place that no
    one can get at.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Hexagon

    I dont like the title you chose for your poem but okay over all.

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    Re: Hexagon

    Personally I didn't care for the title I chose either...I know that sounds weird but it's true. I really think I could have done better
    Dear Dinah...

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