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  1. Mar 11, 2011 10:53 AM #1
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    Hidden Blue World

    Liquid like floor,
    Resonances as deterred by my influence.
    Long blue horizontal,
    Dark deep Prussian seas below me.

    Deep enough to call it black,
    Ever changing and ever resonating.
    Pulsing from me,
    All over this once bright horizon.

    I could just lie down,
    Watch all the changes around me.
    One by one the pieces start to show.
    No matter how hard I close my eyes, I can still see them.

    Useless endeavour rending meaningless suffering,
    Impeccable situation for impending doom.
    Yet another pulse passes by,
    Telling me of my inner thoughts.

    A soft violin stroke fills the air,
    Gently opening my sight.
    Unreachable drop of light,
    Yes, I can see it.

    I will not let it out of my sight,
    This little seed given to me.
    I will slowly help it grow.
    It will be the new ideal place for yet another sun.

    If it meant to turn this world upside down,
    If it meant to change everything again...
    It shall be yet another necessary sacrifice.
    To be the shadow of me that I could only dream of becoming.

    Impossible, I hate that word...
    I’ll grin in your face one day.
    When I have it all,
    Yes, when I reached the pinnacle of my dreams...

    I will laugh in your face and escape this blue sanctuary...

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  2. Mar 16, 2011 06:09 AM #2
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    well i wouldnt say that this is the happiest poem in the world...but i guess its an improvement...but i have a question.....

    what does "Resonances" mean.....

    oh oops i forgot to say that i liked it. and i did. good work. *smiles* =]
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    Re: Hidden Blue World

    :3 Resonate is like waves or what is the other word for it.. uuh... pulses! yes.. :3

    Resonances are collection of pulses I guess... or a way to depict where pulses resonate from... usually used for echoes... but oh well... :3

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  4. Mar 16, 2011 10:25 AM #4
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    oh i like kitties! *daydreaming* ohhh! so cute!!! *starts spinning*
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    Re: Hidden Blue World

    xD just what i'd expected.. well then i'll take that as a request and... you'll see what i could make out of that... hmmm give me some time... :3

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    Re: Hidden Blue World

    well im not a very good poem critic but my mom used to write them all the time and has a couple in a poem book but you seem to have a good grasp i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work =D
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    :3 thanks you! How flattering uuu... don't you do poems too? ^^
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    Re: Hidden Blue World

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    :3 thanks you! How flattering uuu... don't you do poems too? ^^
    nooooooooooooooo i suck at them lol but i also like hikus lol
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