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    Hidden Heart

    My heart is hidden all the time.
    Those who I know and let my guard down I will let in.
    They are the only ones who I show my true self.
    I've gone thourgh crap only thoes who have been chosen by god knows.
    For those who try I will show nothing not even emotion.

    Every one trys to see the real me but they have to get though my cold,
    hard barrier I've built around my heart.
    I will give a standing ovation for those who try.
    Keep trying I will tell them you have to do better than that.

    Through out the years I've put up an ice and cold barrier from all
    of my stupied choices I've made.
    I will always hide my heart from ever getting hurt or abused again.
    But I know I will have to face the truth sometime or another.
    For right now I will keep my heart hidden from getting hurt ever again.

    I hope you all enjoy it.

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    Re: Hidden Heart

    This is good hidden heart... like a mask..

    nicely done.. ^^ hm...u could use more methaphors in here.. ^^ to make it better...
    keep up the good work sis~!

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    Re: Hidden Heart

    hey Ice nice work. very well done. and I know what you mean about the barrier. lol I have one too. anyways good job and I hope to see more.
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    Re: Hidden Heart

    Thank Rayme and Ichigo for all the nice comments. I will try my best to come up with some more poems.

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    Re: Hidden Heart

    Your welcome Ice always glad to help a friend. Keep it up though your poems are good.
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    Re: Hidden Heart

    Quote Originally Posted by ice viper View Post
    My heart is hidden all the time.
    Those who I know and let my guard down I will let in.
    They are the only ones who I show my true self.
    I've gone thourgh crap only thoes who have been chosen by god knows.
    For those who try I will show nothing not even emotion.

    Every one trys to see the real me but they have to get though my cold,
    hard barrier I've built around my heart.
    I will give a standing ovation for those who try.
    Keep trying I will tell them you have to do better than that.

    Through out the years I've put up an ice and cold barrier from all
    of my stupied choices I've made.
    I will always hide my heart from ever getting hurt or abused again.
    But I know I will have to face the truth sometime or another.
    For right now I will keep my heart hidden from getting hurt ever again.

    I hope you all enjoy it.
    This one is Better then the First one*I hate you * I like read it ..
    You should show the other your heart not hid it ..like a mask ..^^
    Nice work ...Keep it up...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Hidden Heart

    It is easier to hide the feelings' of the heart, this is a good poem ice... Keep up the excellent work... Hope to read more of it...

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