Thread: Hidden Heart

This is good hidden heart... like a mask..

nicely done.. ^^ hm...u could use more methaphors in here.. ^^ to make it better...
keep up the good work sis~!

hey Ice nice work. very well done. and I know what you mean about the barrier. lol I have one too. anyways good job and I hope to see more.

Thank Rayme and Ichigo for all the nice comments. I will try my best to come up with some more poems.

Your welcome Ice always glad to help a friend. Keep it up though your poems are good.

Originally Posted by ice viper

My heart is hidden all the time.
Those who I know and let my guard down I will let in.
They are the only ones who I show my true self.
I've gone thourgh crap only thoes who have been chosen by god knows.
For those who try I will show nothing not even emotion.

Every one trys to see the real me but they have to get though my cold,
hard barrier I've built around my heart.
I will give a standing ovation for those who try.
Keep trying I will tell them you have to do better than that.

Through out the years I've put up an ice and cold barrier from all
of my stupied choices I've made.
I will always hide my heart from ever getting hurt or abused again.
But I know I will have to face the truth sometime or another.
For right now I will keep my heart hidden from getting hurt ever again.

I hope you all enjoy it.

This one is Better then the First one*I hate you * I like read it ..
You should show the other your heart not hid it ..like a mask ..^^
Nice work ...Keep it up...

It is easier to hide the feelings' of the heart, this is a good poem ice... Keep up the excellent work... Hope to read more of it...