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Sep 25, 2007, 05:39 AM
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  Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: I'm lost
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 Credits: 3,404 | Hidden Heart My heart is hidden all the time. Those who I know and let my guard down I will let in. They are the only ones who I show my true self. I've gone thourgh crap only thoes who have been chosen by god knows. For those who try I will show nothing not even emotion. Every one trys to see the real me but they have to get though my cold, hard barrier I've built around my heart. I will give a standing ovation for those who try. Keep trying I will tell them you have to do better than that. Through out the years I've put up an ice and cold barrier from all of my stupied choices I've made. I will always hide my heart from ever getting hurt or abused again. But I know I will have to face the truth sometime or another. For right now I will keep my heart hidden from getting hurt ever again. I hope you all enjoy it. |
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Sep 25, 2007, 05:45 AM
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 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,148 | Re: Hidden Heart This is good  hidden heart... like a mask..  nicely done.. ^^ hm...u could use more methaphors in here.. ^^ to make it better... keep up the good work sis~! |
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Sep 25, 2007, 07:03 AM
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 Dragonrider  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,744 | Re: Hidden Heart hey Ice nice work. very well done. and I know what you mean about the barrier. lol I have one too. anyways good job and I hope to see more.
__________________  ナサン フォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173 |
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Sep 25, 2007, 06:15 PM
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| Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,744 | Re: Hidden Heart Your welcome Ice always glad to help a friend. Keep it up though your poems are good.
__________________ ナサン フォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173 |
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Sep 25, 2007, 08:08 PM
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| Otaku  | Re: Hidden Heart Quote:
You should show the other your heart not hid it ..like a mask ..^^ Nice work ...Keep it up...
__________________ "I'm not going there to die. I'm going to find out if I'm really alive." Spike Spiegel (Cowboy Bebop) | |
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Sep 25, 2007, 09:07 PM
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| Otaku  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Close to the edge or in my dreams
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Credits: 9,871 | Re: Hidden Heart It is easier to hide the feelings' of the heart, this is a good poem ice... Keep up the excellent work... Hope to read more of it... |
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