Thread: Hidden Love

aaaaaah so sweet and yet sooooo sad, i wanna hug you

I felt that feeling before, and I made a short(but really its long) story about it... Entitled, "Your Sword Versus My Dagger"... Maybe you'd noticed that it has no connections, but it does... When I post it here, you all will see...
Anyways, awesome poem... I'm surprised that there are like you here...

I have to agree with Souske that you don't get to read many people's poems who write like you! I didn't see any problems with the structure and I really enjoyed how you put your emotions to work in this poem! Great Job!

i love that poem... really.. I'm not lying... so sad.. full of emotions.. but a really sad emotion!!... I might cry because of it.. *sighs* Just kidding... you know i had that experience lately,, you see.. there is a boy *he's a schoolmate of mine* Last year we were Classmates that time.. He kept on telling me that he likes me but i dont really believe him.. you know why?? You see,, he is telling that line with a loud voice in front of me with his friends at his side in a very crowded place.. well in my responce im just listening in whatever he said coz he had done it to me a thousand times... I dont believe that he really likes me... but so sad i'm actually kinda falling for him.. *sighs* and i hate it!! But im not telling anyone even my bestfriend dont know anything about this... but still im dennying that i kinda like him.. i dont want to be... well.. as time passes he always call at home talking about nothing... nothing and nothing.. just making me annoyed telling me that he likes me!!.. and well after one year... well until our classes came... he's still like that.. but kinda more serious.. he asked me to be his girlfriend... but as usual i didn't believe in him!! he always told me that thing again and again.. i'm kinda becoming annoyed by him!!.. huhuhu.. one day he called,, asked me again that same question.. i still refuse.. then he asked me when can he asked that question again,, then i told him "you can asked that again when i'm already in collage". then he asked if he has a chance on me,, then i said "yeah,, kinda!!,, but if you can wait you really have a chance..".. then it is where it ends... i was told by my bestfriend that ***** told her that he already got a girlfriend... and she said that the girl is our school mate.. and as well shes kinda happy because that boy would not be annoying me anymore... I was shocked.. i thought at that time that his girlfriend is me... well because of the phonecall... i asked her if she knows the name.. then she said "no,, He dont want to tell the name,, coz she'll be angry".. well in my mind i thought i was that girl.. but i then recall that there was one girl who liked him secretly and thier kinda textmates that time.. he said that he kinda like the girl too.. well hes kinda a chic boy right?? but it was his first girl.. hehehe.. i already know who was the girl he's talking about.. that night i called him then said "Congrats",, he was curiuos... he said why would i congradulate *wrong spelling* him i never accepted his request.. then i said no theres nothing to do with me.. well.. he was shocked.. he asked me if i already know about it.. then i said yeah!!.. then he said "i'm sorry".. "well why are you sorry your not my property right??..".. he thought i was upset... but kinda yeah.. he broke his promise... well now,, i dont really talk to him anymore but he's still my friend... i always smile whenever i meet him.. Just letting him know that i dont care about it even though i do care... im upset about it.. Liar.... i hate him,, secretly... but i'm happy coz he's happy now... i'll just have to let him go.. ^^
well thats what happend to me.. but i'll forget about it!!

My eyes @.@ colours~!! *faints*

Hmmm this is quite a nice poem ^^ to hide ones love and sacrifice what we want most for their happiness and discard ours... :/ sheesh thats deep.. ^^ good job... i'll be reading ur poems from now on keep up the good work ~!

i have to say i love this poem it was just awsome i know that feeling imkinda going throw it right now but im loseing hope! any way great poem

That is like really sweet and cute and I wuv it. I wish i could cuddle it. Cause it just soo good.lol.
but yes keep up the good work and hope to see more^.^