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    Hidden love

    I knew you conquered me
    when I was looking at your back or silhouette
    love was suffered day and night
    I was silent
    didn't say didn't sing
    I like the natural combination

    what perhaps belongs to me
    glided gently and quietly from my eyelash

    One day people told me you fell in love
    I didn't say anything
    couldn't say anything

    At late night, I cried and then smiled
    I gave the deep blessing to the blowing wind
    until now I still believe
    the hidden love is the deepest one

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Hidden love

    wow... hidden love huh... :/ thats liking some1 or loving some1 without the one loved knowing we love him/her... sheesh... :/ thats pretty sad...
    *sighs* ^^ good poem ^^ i like the theme.. *pats ur bak* ^^ keep up the good work...

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    Re: Hidden love

    Yep... I agree with Ray.. It is a really good poem you've made xxoxx keep up the your good work

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    Re: Hidden love

    Man... I love you... <<

    I read Lasura's last one and that made me want to read a lovey poem, so I clicked this... and I totally thought it would be different. Tads to you for the surprise of it ^^

    All you have to do is fix up a few tiny errors and it'll be all shiny.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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