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    Hidden path

    My mind is chaotic,
    I cannot see my path,
    They tell me it's laid out before me,
    I have to simply open my eyes.

    But when they are open,
    They are stung by the cold air,
    My body is shivering,
    I fall to my knees.

    I have felt my strength leaving me,
    The wind is howling as I feel so cold,
    The blood flow is slowing down,
    The path is hidden from me.

    I pray for my angel to come save me,
    And yet it appears that I must go,
    My time has come,
    There is no one to come save me.

    I can hear my heart slowing down,
    Those last few beats, the night sky,
    Laid out before me, the stars shining brightly,
    At least there will be rest.....

    something i tot of

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    The flow of the poem was amazing not until the last part. I don't know if it was part of the poem or not.

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    tut tut Jason.

    Thank you for making it short.

    ^_~ You made is sounds so peacful around the end.

    Lovey it is~
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