The flow of the poem was amazing not until the last part. I don't know if it was part of the poem or not.
My mind is chaotic,
I cannot see my path,
They tell me it's laid out before me,
I have to simply open my eyes.
But when they are open,
They are stung by the cold air,
My body is shivering,
I fall to my knees.
I have felt my strength leaving me,
The wind is howling as I feel so cold,
The blood flow is slowing down,
The path is hidden from me.
I pray for my angel to come save me,
And yet it appears that I must go,
My time has come,
There is no one to come save me.
I can hear my heart slowing down,
Those last few beats, the night sky,
Laid out before me, the stars shining brightly,
At least there will be rest.....
something i tot of
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
The flow of the poem was amazing not until the last part. I don't know if it was part of the poem or not.
tut tut Jason.
Thank you for making it short.
^_~ You made is sounds so peacful around the end.
Lovey it is~
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