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you hide your fears
you hide your crys
please dont show those tears
people will wonder why

you try to forget your sorrows
but life goes on
you wait till tommorrow
you keep going on

your life seems sad
you always wanted to feel proud
but things wont grow bad
for you always feel proud

thank you, i tried to make the 1 and 3 verse sound better but i cant find the words right

excelente!!!!!!!!
to me they fitted right. words and all. im not the rhy,=ming type. i couldnt do it. i like it.

thank you and hopefully you can be good at rhymes too

i really like your piece of work. i hope to see more from you.

thank you very much, hopefully i can think of some more too

nice brother, i like the begginning of it, sounds more interesting keep it up

wow brother didn't know u were into poems...lol but it very good and i like how it rymes