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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    you hide your fears
    you hide your crys
    please dont show those tears
    people will wonder why

    you try to forget your sorrows
    but life goes on
    you wait till tommorrow
    you keep going on

    your life seems sad
    you always wanted to feel proud
    but things wont grow bad
    for you always feel proud

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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    thank you, i tried to make the 1 and 3 verse sound better but i cant find the words right

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    excelente!!!!!!!!
    to me they fitted right. words and all. im not the rhy,=ming type. i couldnt do it. i like it.

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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    thank you and hopefully you can be good at rhymes too

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    i really like your piece of work. i hope to see more from you.
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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    thank you very much, hopefully i can think of some more too

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    nice brother, i like the begginning of it, sounds more interesting keep it up
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    wow brother didn't know u were into poems...lol but it very good and i like how it rymes
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