Oh wow!! I love this poem! I love scary stuff and this was excellent! Hope to see more!![]()
Hide and Seek
A bounce
A leap
Was in its step
As though it were happy about the death
One swoop
No pain
It was all just a game
To the creature that had two faces to blame
A face you say?
No, rather...
A mask for play
It would come at night
To give you a fright
And a taste of what's to come
But when it was done
It would be gone
As though it was only a ghost
The children made fun
As they played in the sun
Not expecting the creature to show
They waited 'till dark
In the local park
And were never heard from again
One is to say
That is was the creature's play
A game of Hide and Seek
To this day I wonder whom
The creature of two faces was?
An angel of light
Or rather a demon of the night
All that I can tell you is that it wants to play
A game of Hide and Seek
You're it...
by Majime(rae)
Thank you so much for the generous comment. I'll be sure to post some more later.! ^-^
haha, this is a cool poem u wrote. =] Its nice =] Can't wait for more.
me likie. wow a peom that makes sense. that rhymes that has thought into it and it has stanzas. Finally your good i like the ending. and i don't want to sound uptight or teacherish. but i like that you kept to some of the structure that a poem should have.
>.<...wow...thank you all so much...I am going to post some more...really soon.!
I'm always glad to see newbies posting... and if it's a poem, I'm sure he/she will post again... and it makes me sooo happy!!! ^^ And if it's a good poem, like this one... It's just great!!! It just makes my day!!
This really is a great work Majime, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I'd really wish to see more of your works!!!
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