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    Re: In Hiding...

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Wow! Thanks to all of you who've commented on this so far! ^_^
    I didn't think I'd get such good comments on this one, to be honest with you all. LOL.
    I'm glad you all took the time to read this and I'm happy you liked it!

    Bratling, I've always thought it as strange, how we deal with entirely different issues the exact same way. LOL
    's cus your my ex husband. we rubbed off on each other more then we thought apparently

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: In Hiding...

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    's cus your my ex husband. we rubbed off on each other more then we thought apparently
    Yeah, you're right. ^_^

    I think we rubbed off on each other a lil' TOO much. I've been tempted to hide in the closet a few times.


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    Re: In Hiding...

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Pretending...
    Acting like there's nothing wrong.
    Yet stuck with problems all day long.
    I think this part strikes a chord with a great number of people . . . this feeling is quite common among people.


    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Numbing...
    Like a boat-load of novicaine.
    That's is my favourite line in the entire poem! It's so well put! As with novicaine, you no longer feel the problem, even though it's still there. Well said, indeed!

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    An excellent poem. This is without a doubt your best one. Well done, Atomik; well done, indeed!

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    Re: In Hiding...

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Yeah, you're right. ^_^

    I think we rubbed off on each other a lil' TOO much. I've been tempted to hide in the closet a few times.
    I wish I had a closet.. Oh how I wish I had a closet.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by divine_punishment View Post
    I think this part strikes a chord with a great number of people . . . this feeling is quite common among people.




    That's is my favourite line in the entire poem! It's so well put! As with novicaine, you no longer feel the problem, even though it's still there. Well said, indeed!

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    An excellent poem. This is without a doubt your best one. Well done, Atomik; well done, indeed!
    Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I didn't know if people would really read between the lines of this poem, but apparently I stand/sit corrected. ^_^ Thanks again!


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    oh wow.. this is wonderful... it really spoke to me. I know what it feels like to always be hiding how you feel and everything. It's really good and I like it. ^-^

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    Re: In Hiding...

    Mm I find all this mighty interesting precluding everything recent. I really hope you quit doing this to yourself. <3 smile...!

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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