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    Hierarchy

    Hierarchy

    Part I

    Bright lit skies, and dancing grass,
    Lands of freedom, future and past.
    But what atrocities haunt the day?
    Smiling frowns with something to say.

    Hidden beliefs quickly beaten down,
    The whips whip voices for their sound.
    A deaf ruled monarch of ignorant bliss.
    All would change on one discrete kiss.

    A touch of lips that stained the realm,
    Forbidden touches made to renown.
    They loved each other without question,
    Soon they’d learn mistakes of suggestion
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    Re: Hierarchy

    Well, this is a wonderful poem to read. Flow and rhyme are executed beautifully. nice job.
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    Re: Hierarchy

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Well, this is a wonderful poem to read. Flow and rhyme are executed beautifully. nice job.

    Well.. this is just the intro to something I'm working on. Watch for the next five parts I've written already.
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    Re: Hierarchy

    That's a cool poem. It was sweet and moving all at the same time. I can't wait to read more.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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