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Reply With QuoteI like your Hierarchy compilation. A series of poems split apart like episodes almost. I have posted nearly the same thing on ever part but I will now talk about Hierarchy in general. All in all a great well put together poem. The last part?
Hierarchy
Part V
War had finally come to the land,
So the warrior took his sword in hand,
With a vow of promised return,
He rode to tend the kingdoms concern
His eyes saw nothing but death and pain,
His armor rusted in blood and rain,
Legions vast with honorable men,
He’d seen them fall again and again.
With weeping tears, and mind concerned,
He would relish her, upon his returned.
But sorry to say, she’d been taken
His oath a façade, his heart mistaken,
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I like your Hierarchy compilation. A series of poems split apart like episodes almost. I have posted nearly the same thing on ever part but I will now talk about Hierarchy in general. All in all a great well put together poem. The last part?
wow your rhyming is really good! it makes perfect sense and non of it is cliche. i like it
That was just as good if not better than the other 5. This story always seems to get more interesting as it goes along. I can't wait to read part 7.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Part 6 you mean? :P.. I've only done 5 parts ^.^.. no worries though.. It shall come soon, sometime between my artwork I'll whip it up :P
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