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    Hierarchy V


    Part V

    War had finally come to the land,
    So the warrior took his sword in hand,
    With a vow of promised return,
    He rode to tend the kingdoms concern

    His eyes saw nothing but death and pain,
    His armor rusted in blood and rain,
    Legions vast with honorable men,
    He’d seen them fall again and again.

    With weeping tears, and mind concerned,
    He would relish her, upon his returned.
    But sorry to say, she’d been taken
    His oath a façade, his heart mistaken,

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    Re: Hierarchy V

    I really like how this one as well as the other 4 all picked up where the other left off. It is a very good poem and I look forward to reading part 6.
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