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    High, Coo' ?

    (HAIKU)

    I guess I'm crazy.
    Psychotic and obsessive.
    So why are you here?


    Rigorous training.
    A femme-bot can never rest.
    I'm rechargeable.


    Tell it like it is...
    Honesty hatches like eggs.
    The sunny side up.


    You can't hide the truth
    in heartbreak and confusion.
    It knows how to dig...


    I'm a late bloomer.
    Don't underestimate me.
    There's tricks up my sleeve.


    Getting over it
    is easy when you realize
    No one loves you back
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: High, Coo' ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    (HAIKU)
    Getting over it
    is easy when you realize
    No one loves you back
    had i a dollar for every time i realized that, i'd be able to buy out bill gates.

    I liked how all of the haikus had one small thing in common....well to me they sounded like they did. all in all, nice job, peach. i wouldnt expect anything less.
    Why hello there!

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    Re: High, Coo' ?

    I totally love it!
    Its totally cute and most girls are kind of like that....
    lol I think I would know keep the poems coming they are SO amazing!
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: High, Coo' ?

    @ Neodeath

    I realized that I was writing specifically about a certain facet of my life, for like 4 of these haiku.

    @ rikus

    Thank you for taking the time to read.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: High, Coo' ?

    Haiku' one of the first poems I learned in literature... If they was a facet of your life they all show how talented & creative you are, but I don't see you as half of the things you portrayed yourself as, but honest... But I do know how loving someone & not getting it in full return can make one an android... Trust' I know!!!

    * What makes it funny the whole femm' bot theme you have going on; I actually wrote a poem about love turning me into an android, but it never got finished & I had started it like a month or two ago... Maybe I will try & finish it, since I got a lil' inspiration... ^_^
    *I swear on my life all this is true... I think you be reading my mind lol... ^_^

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: High, Coo' ?

    I think you be reading my mind lol... ^_^
    I have thought the same thing about you before... Just a couple weeks ago I was auditioning, and you were looking for a main character.
    Anyway, I would love to read a poem about love turning you into an android.

    And I bet you don't see me the way I portray myself. I am very emotional. Not cold like a femmebot. But its a goal (like I said, I'm still in training).
    ... Not Ever Again...

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