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Old Sep 05, 2006, 09:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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In History , You And I were Ment to be

life is one vision
that lives deep down in our decision
meant to be ?
or destiny?
i don't care what walks towards me
there's only one thing that truly matters to me
hello . my love
remember me?
memories
are still living in you and me
as we said
for eternity
together just you and me
the words were the true kisses between you and me
and i believe
no matter what become of you and me
you will always love me
the purest of thy (do you mean 'thee'?)
the angel that exists just for me
and the only godess who held a scar
" i loved only thy "
remember ?
i told you
if you ever suffer terribly
don't keep anything from me
come here, run to me
leave your pain and come here between my arms and be happy with me
don't worry , everything will be okay, just trust me
your happiness is what matters to me
our love
is written by our destiny
and enlightened by our dearest memory
that's how we built our history
and kept telling our story
the story staring you and me
and titled " YOU AND ME, WE WERE MEANT TO BE "
as we said
for eternity
we ran down history
just you and me
with the love that was meant to be
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Old Sep 06, 2006, 03:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: In History , You And I were Ment to be

Man, the title caught my attention and I was hoping for a brilliant poem. Instead? I got short stanzas, no punctuation, and no capitalization. -sigh-

More description and elaboration to the subject would lengthen your verses, and possibly find a way to make some stanzas and breaks.
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Old Sep 06, 2006, 07:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: In History , You And I were Ment to be

Large and short verses a tiwsted poem but with great expression
it awesome!
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 01:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Not a bad poem as long as you wrote what you were feeling at the time, or just trying to find your release it fine in my book!

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