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    In History , You And I were Ment to be

    life is one vision
    that lives deep down in our decision
    meant to be ?
    or destiny?
    i don't care what walks towards me
    there's only one thing that truly matters to me
    hello . my love
    remember me?
    memories
    are still living in you and me
    as we said
    for eternity
    together just you and me
    the words were the true kisses between you and me
    and i believe
    no matter what become of you and me
    you will always love me
    the purest of thy (do you mean 'thee'?)
    the angel that exists just for me
    and the only godess who held a scar
    " i loved only thy "
    remember ?
    i told you
    if you ever suffer terribly
    don't keep anything from me
    come here, run to me
    leave your pain and come here between my arms and be happy with me
    don't worry , everything will be okay, just trust me
    your happiness is what matters to me
    our love
    is written by our destiny
    and enlightened by our dearest memory
    that's how we built our history
    and kept telling our story
    the story staring you and me
    and titled " YOU AND ME, WE WERE MEANT TO BE "
    as we said
    for eternity
    we ran down history
    just you and me
    with the love that was meant to be
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    Re: In History , You And I were Ment to be

    Man, the title caught my attention and I was hoping for a brilliant poem. Instead? I got short stanzas, no punctuation, and no capitalization. -sigh-

    More description and elaboration to the subject would lengthen your verses, and possibly find a way to make some stanzas and breaks.
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    Re: In History , You And I were Ment to be

    Large and short verses a tiwsted poem but with great expression
    it awesome!



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: In History , You And I were Ment to be

    Not a bad poem as long as you wrote what you were feeling at the time, or just trying to find your release it fine in my book!

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