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Jul 17, 2007, 10:00 AM
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 Credits: 110 | Hold my breath. Hold My Breath My eyes gently close As she's walking away I can't bear to watch Or even to stay I will miss her so She leaves me behind All of these tears That I'll have to cry She's all that I have And all that I get My hopes and fantasies Gone with each small step It scares me to death That I can't say a word I know that she's gone So I hold my breath.
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Jul 17, 2007, 10:52 AM
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Credits: 2,641 | Re: Hold my breath. i like the way you set the poem out its new to the way they usally get set out, love the poem as well it has feeling so keep going
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