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    Hold my breath.


    Hold My Breath

    My eyes gently close
    As she's walking away
    I can't bear to watch
    Or even to stay
    I will miss her so
    She leaves me behind
    All of these tears
    That I'll have to cry
    She's all that I have
    And all that I get
    My hopes and fantasies
    Gone with each small step

    It scares me to death
    That I can't say a word
    I know that she's gone
    So I hold my breath.
    You can have the best forum ever.
    But when the mods lock because they have nothing better to do
    You're not going to have a good forum at all.

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    Re: Hold my breath.

    i like the way you set the poem out its new to the way they usally get set out, love the poem as well it has feeling so keep going



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