This poem was good. May I ask, how much time you spent on it? Equinn, once you write a poem, please also take time to revise it, just so to make it an easy-read for the readers.
I’m holding back the tears
From the heart ace and sorrow
That you have caused me
Through the years
Which I thought was a good thing
But know I see we both have different ideas about life
So I’m going to go my way and you can go yours
And we both shall see were we and up
And I know one thing
We both won’t end in
The same place.
Keep up the good work, and write more! ^_^