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Reply With QuoteI really liked it. It made me think of how some of my past loves have ended up. You never cease to amaze me with the stories and poems that come from your mind as well as your heart. Awesome job and I'm sure your next one will be just as great.
Everything I Feel Is A Raging
Blackness With In Me ,I Try To
Hold It Back As I Say I Want Be
Hurt By You,All I Can Do Is Pray
That I Never Loose You.
As Time Goes By The Blackness
Turns To Love ,The Anger Fades
Away Just Like A Earth Quake After
The Explosion Of A Volcanoe , I Try
To Hold Back My Frustrations But All
I Do Is Scream.
You,You Make My Life Complete
As I Make Myself Change,Change
For The Better But I Struggle So
Much To Hold Back My Tear's
When You Hold Back What You Mean.
The Darkness It Want's Me To Comeback
Home , But Ignore It's Call For You......
This poem shows how when a person is so confused
they just stop talking the final sentence is what i was
trying to show here . any comments or idea's will help
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
I really liked it. It made me think of how some of my past loves have ended up. You never cease to amaze me with the stories and poems that come from your mind as well as your heart. Awesome job and I'm sure your next one will be just as great.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Very nice once again. I know where you're coming from on thisIt was a nice way to end it and yeah, I could feel your confusion.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
Bro awesome job! I feel your confusion and I understand where your coming from on this one! I've felt like that couple of times, and you executed it perfectly!
thanks i am glad you liked it bro i was haveing a moment likes that myself earlier but i am fine now ,though the poem expresses everyone. so
i am glad you could relate.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Bro a poem like that is hard not to be able to relate to! Every line had emotion and it brought back the memories of how I felt when I was going through the same thing! I'm glad that you wrote it and shared it with me! Keep up the Outstanding Job!
i will and thanks will post more later i did another poem last night as well but this one was more about my feeling than being with someone
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
*claps* nice peom HolderOfTheDarkChalice, it was neatly well written.
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