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    Holding Back

    Everything I Feel Is A Raging
    Blackness With In Me ,I Try To
    Hold It Back As I Say I Want Be
    Hurt By You,All I Can Do Is Pray
    That I Never Loose You.

    As Time Goes By The Blackness
    Turns To Love ,The Anger Fades
    Away Just Like A Earth Quake After
    The Explosion Of A Volcanoe , I Try
    To Hold Back My Frustrations But All
    I Do Is Scream.

    You,You Make My Life Complete
    As I Make Myself Change,Change
    For The Better But I Struggle So
    Much To Hold Back My Tear's
    When You Hold Back What You Mean.

    The Darkness It Want's Me To Comeback
    Home , But Ignore It's Call For You......

    This poem shows how when a person is so confused
    they just stop talking the final sentence is what i was
    trying to show here . any comments or idea's will help
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Holding Back

    I really liked it. It made me think of how some of my past loves have ended up. You never cease to amaze me with the stories and poems that come from your mind as well as your heart. Awesome job and I'm sure your next one will be just as great.
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    Re: Holding Back

    Very nice once again. I know where you're coming from on this It was a nice way to end it and yeah, I could feel your confusion.
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    Re: Holding Back

    Bro awesome job! I feel your confusion and I understand where your coming from on this one! I've felt like that couple of times, and you executed it perfectly!

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    Re: Holding Back

    thanks i am glad you liked it bro i was haveing a moment likes that myself earlier but i am fine now ,though the poem expresses everyone. so
    i am glad you could relate.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Holding Back

    Bro a poem like that is hard not to be able to relate to! Every line had emotion and it brought back the memories of how I felt when I was going through the same thing! I'm glad that you wrote it and shared it with me! Keep up the Outstanding Job!

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    Re: Holding Back

    i will and thanks will post more later i did another poem last night as well but this one was more about my feeling than being with someone
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Holding Back

    *claps* nice peom HolderOfTheDarkChalice, it was neatly well written.

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