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Reply With QuoteYou have a great outlook on things that is what makes this poem so good. I like it alot,but if you could make it longer that would be better let those feelings out and dont hold back.
I gotta take a little time
to hold back my memories
to think things over
and not pass the line
so if i need them for when im older
through the clouds i see sunshine
in my life i have suffer a lot
i dont know if i cant hold it anymore
I need a little time
to think about thinks around me
and go back were i happy
i go no were elss to hide
is like i finally found my dream
cant stop now
i have made it so far
this can change my life
even if no one is on my side
I know i will live
as a calm spirit
now i can feel it
that in my life has been love
and i cant be stoped
by shatterd memories
that have been holding m back
since i left from my home
to the cold world
perdoname michelle!
You have a great outlook on things that is what makes this poem so good. I like it alot,but if you could make it longer that would be better let those feelings out and dont hold back.
bravo! memories that we want to keep often seem to fade the quickest.so you hold as hard as you can!
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How creative!!! Bravo on the memories!! I love how you talked about it!!! It was just simply amazing! I hope to read more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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