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Aug 08, 2007, 07:13 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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 Credits: 59,118 | Hole... Hole... Deep, dark... My voice echoes through. Stranded in a hole, Helpless. Paralyzed body makes it worse. A small trait of light can be seen above. How far down am i? i sighed. Rats, roaches... So many underground creatures walks on me. Disgusting and irritating... there is nothing i can do. Dehydrated and starving. The damp soil is far too dirty. With little hope, I waited for the rain to come. Every second feel like minutes, minutes feels like hours,hours like days. My patience is running out.. So does my sanity... Will there be a rope coming down from above? or.... Will i see the wings of an angel... or maybe the scythe of a devil... |
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Aug 08, 2007, 07:29 AM
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| Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,192 | Re: Hole... Aaa! my greatest fear ilustrated!!!!!!!! *hides* To die stuck in a hole, slowly, tormenting, painfully... *shivers* Nice work with the descriptions... freking me out... But I must say the "End of the Line" is better... Something is missing here... |
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Aug 09, 2007, 02:28 AM
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| 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Hole... hmm the one b4 is better? sheesh...i must make better poems after this.. -.- *rolls on the floor* @.@ thanks for the comment~! |
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