In a hole

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 06, 2007, 09:00 AM

You want me and I want you.
Yet we're stuck in in a hole, so
what should we do?

Pick up a ladder and
put down the spoon.
We'll climb on out instead
of digging until noon.

Grab my hand and
come home with me.
Let's pick up where we
left off; let's be a family.

Because if you want me
as bad as I want you,
then there should be nothing
keeping us from being one
instead of two...

highteckdudu · Nov 06, 2007, 11:13 AM

*tears* That was so great it was... was... I dont know... great job i like your work! but i tell you that all the time! I meant it thought! Keep it up yo!

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 06, 2007, 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by highteckdudu

*tears* That was so great it was... was... I dont know... great job i like your work! but i tell you that all the time! I meant it thought! Keep it up yo!

With supporters like you, I will continue to keep it up until my fingers fall off. ^_^ Thanks a bunch, highteck!

Astaroth · Nov 06, 2007, 02:56 PM

Wow.........very, very romantic!!!!!!!!
Loved it and keep up the good work!!!!!!

*RayMe* · Nov 06, 2007, 11:24 PM

Quote:

Pick up a ladder and
put down the spoon.
We'll climb on out instead
of digging until noon.

Spoon , and noon... sounds like lunch... *tummy growls* -.- sheesh...

Hmm... a very nice poem... nicely done..i enjoyed it.. simple and nice but deep..

keep it up ^^ noce work

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 07:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Pick up a ladder and
put down the spoon.
We'll climb on out instead
of digging until noon.

hum ditching work are we? LOL anyways on a serious not there sprout I thought it was one of the best poems I have read. man you have a way with words and I enjoy reading your work over and over. I hope the best for you and your other. anyways keep up the writing I enjoy reading your poems and hate myself for not reading any of them sooner! You have my support in your writing to and I think you would keel before your fingers fall off budd.

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 07, 2007, 08:24 AM

Thank you Astaroth, RayMe and Ichigo06! ^_^

You guys are always kind enough to take time to read my work! I'm glad you like it!

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 08:29 AM

Your much welcome sprout keep up the posting I enjoy reading all of your poems.

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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	In a hole You want me and I want you. Yet we're stuck in in a hole, so what should we do? Pick up a ladder and put down the spoon. We'll climb on out instead of digging until noon. Grab my hand and come home with me. Let's pick up where we left off; let's be a family. Because if you want me as bad as I want you, then there should be nothing keeping us from being one instead of two... __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: In a hole tears That was so great it was... was... I dont know... great job i like your work! but i tell you that all the time! I meant it thought! Keep it up yo! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 562 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,396	Re: In a hole Wow.........very, very romantic!!!!!!!! Loved it and keep up the good work!!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Re: In a hole Thank you Astaroth, RayMe and Ichigo06! ^_^ You guys are always kind enough to take time to read my work! I'm glad you like it! __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: In a hole Your much welcome sprout keep up the posting I enjoy reading all of your poems. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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