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    The hole in my pillow

    There's a hole in my pillow
    that eats while I sleep
    Drinking my dreamings
    it's getting quite deep.
    This hole in my pillow
    is starting to creep
    The hole in my pillow
    now is on to my sheet.

    Through the hole in my mattress
    my thoughts disappear
    and enters in darkness
    through the hole in my ear.
    The hole in my mattress
    grows like my fear.
    And there in the nightness
    it becomes very clear

    that this hole in my mattress
    has shook itself free
    of the blankets and bedclothes
    and begins to breath.
    Once a hole in my pillow,
    it sits up at me.
    Legs, feet, arms, neck
    and black eyes to see.

    With dawn in the window,
    the hole became red,
    then blue then hued
    as I would have dressed
    That hole in my pillow
    on my dreams it fed,
    has left with my name tag
    as I sink in bed.
    Last edited by zefielyn; Mar 19, 2009 at 08:27 AM. Reason: tense
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    Re: The hole in my pillow

    Somehow it's creepy but I likethe poem...
    But somehow I think I understand what you are saying...
    Only I dont know how to tell that...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: The hole in my pillow

    wow, that is really amazing. i am actually thinking about how it would seriously look, the dark. it was a bit creepy but good.

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    Re: The hole in my pillow

    Like what the two ppl above me says..
    This is creepy and dark but great...
    Keep it up and more power to you to create more poems..^_^
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...

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