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    the hollows pumpkings in the gate

    The first one said,
    Oh my, it's getting late.
    The second one said,
    wut we don't care.
    The third one said,
    I see witches in the air.
    The fourth one said,
    Let's run, and run, and run.
    The fifth one said,
    Get ready for some fun
    Then whoosh went the wind,
    and out went the lights,
    And five little pumpkins rolled out of sight!


    happy hollowen AO dudes and dudets
    Last edited by Baal; Oct 07, 2006 at 08:44 AM.



    perdoname michelle!

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    That was a cute little poem. It gets you into the halloween mood.

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    A poem about pumpkins!!! wow. i liked the idea, it's unique. reminds me about the upcoming Hallooween!!! you gave each pumpkin a character! This poem has a personification format *it is appplying human traits or qualities to objects* nice!

    it good to see a new style.

    but the text color just made my eyes hurt...

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    This is a totally new concept! Good job on this one I honestly never would've thought about making a poem about pumpkins!

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    thank'sa evryone ok ill make the letter color less blurry.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Baal, that was freaking awesome man, but you forgot to add the morale of the peom.

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