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    I wrote this piece while feeling incredibly homesick after I moved to CA.

    "Home"
    There is a place far from here
    Where red-tail hawks fly free.
    The sky rains down welcomeing tears.
    Oh! this place I long to see.

    There is a place far away
    Where the woodlands stretch for miles.
    There is a place where the foxes play.
    Oh! this place it makes me smile.

    There is aplace so close to my heart
    Where welcome fires burn.
    All I must do is depart
    And go to this place my heart so yearns!

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    Re: Home

    It's a very cute poem. You can see where the inspiration came from. Just a few minor spelling errors.
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    Re: Home

    yes. i can understand your feel that missing the home. but, it real nice. very good!

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    Re: Home

    Good poem. I felt like that after I moved from where I'm at now and it did make me a little homesick. I can't wait to read your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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