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Hope
As I stand over the lake,
Glairing at my reflection
I try to think of a way to set things straight
Hours go by yet still have nothing,
I walk along the lake still thinking yet
Nothing ..
So I make my way to the top of the highest mountain
And stair out as far as my eyes could see,
And an eagle glides through the air and looks at me
Then fly’s in a different direction,
So I walk through the forest and see a bird feeding it’s babies in a nest,
I realize that I have a great life and that one day it will be perfect…
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Re: Hope
That is a good poem about nature. It makes me love the outdoors. I can't wait to read your next one.
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Lovely piece!
I always love poems that involve nature, and one's emotions reflected in it.
You capture a very personal and simple moment to beautifully here.
I almost wish it were a little longer!
I can't wait to read more! ^_^
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Thanks, CherryBlossom18 & Spike'sRose. :)
I'm currently thinking up some new poems right now.
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VERY different. A few spelling errors and slight repetition. VERY different, and good.