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    hope

    hope guides me through the day and especialy the night
    hope is what makes my heart fill with delight
    hope makes my world go round and round
    hope is my love and so it goes
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: hope

    good. but you should start each poem with a different word that relates to hope if you really want your poetry connect to a reader. good job. keep up the good work.
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