Hope u Like it :) ok so this I a small but really small piece I wrote... it dosesnt rhyme... so Im not sure if it can be a poem... but anyho... just wanted to share it with u guys.....
ok so my life has changed a lot lately... its been a little hard... hope u guys like it and hopefully realte to it... so here it goes:
I am walking through this dark path
thats is getting darker and darker
as I leave the light of my past behind
walking through this dark realm
that would never let me dream
about those lost memories in my mind
that keep my soul alife.
Im not a writer... I fact I dont like writing that much.... but is just something I wrote... hope u liked it....
ps. it doesnt have a name... so if u have any suggestions......
Thank you SasuraiHell for making my sig. ur the best."I came, I saw, I conquered" - Julious Cesar
You know what for not being a writter that was really good. Poems don't have to rhyme all just as long as you put your feelings into it that is what makes a good poem. As for a name I can not help you with that I have a hard time coming up with names for mine sorry.
Your an amazing poetic!!!!!!!!!!! This such a good poem! You sure your not a writer cause this is actually really good! I loved how you explain that you step to the darkness but this is an awesome poem!!! I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
my suggestion for your poems name is "losing my soul" i really enjoyed your poem,i know you dont like writing but I think you should give it a chance. my only critisism is that you should make them a bit longer.great job!
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loved this poem cuz it reminds of memories, souls, and its so spiritual
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