hopeless state

Darkened_Star · Feb 17, 2007, 09:11 PM

Peaceful feeling,
never leave me.
Keep me here,
this fake happy.

Constant emptiness,
never leave me.
Keep me open,
this constant pain.

Broken mind,
never heal me.
Keep me dumb,
this blindness.

Shattered life,
never heal me.
Keep me hurting,
this darkened feeling.

Beautiful dreams,
stay away.
Leave me be,
this hopeless state.

This one was written a while back, but I still feel the same...

god of death · Feb 17, 2007, 09:16 PM

lost....hopless......all your poems bring alot of old memories to me, but each poem is good and i enjoy reading them keep it up

Dark Moon Cat · Feb 17, 2007, 09:30 PM

ahh....arnt we all just a couple of black sheep in the herd?

Feb 17, 2007, 09:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 322 Thanks: 2 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,862	hopeless state Peaceful feeling, never leave me. Keep me here, this fake happy. Constant emptiness, never leave me. Keep me open, this constant pain. Broken mind, never heal me. Keep me dumb, this blindness. Shattered life, never heal me. Keep me hurting, this darkened feeling. Beautiful dreams, stay away. Leave me be, this hopeless state. This one was written a while back, but I still feel the same... __________________ Anime Haven
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Feb 17, 2007, 09:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
god of death Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: brimstone graveyard Posts: 156 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 362	Re: hopeless state lost....hopless......all your poems bring alot of old memories to me, but each poem is good and i enjoy reading them keep it up __________________ I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness...... http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php this is my site come and see me there sometime!
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Feb 17, 2007, 09:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
Dark Moon Cat Newbie Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: The Moon Posts: 36 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: hopeless state ahh....arnt we all just a couple of black sheep in the herd?
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