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    How Bad He Hurt

    A young man sat with his only baby girl
    Holding her close to protect her from the world
    He knew this innocence would soon be erased
    Her eyes would be filled with sadness and hate
    He was leaving this world in a short time
    No matter how hard he could try and fight
    The cancer was eating up his body every day
    He hurt him so bad to have to die this way
    He knew he was leaving his daughter all alone
    To face his abusive wife at home on her own
    He knew she'd face some hard nights
    And always have to be up for fight
    He prayed to god to keep his baby safe
    He closed his eyes and had so much faith
    A tear stolled down the cheek of that father
    While everyone else was praying at the alter
    Her daughter let a few roll down her cheeks
    She didn't daddy was going to die in a few weeks
    She just knew something had to be wrong
    Her daddy always acted so strong
    Lately he had been losing alot of weight
    He never felt like going outside to play
    She hugged his thin body to her own
    Please god, she prayed. Let daddy stay home.



    I'll never forget how my dad cried in that church
    Or how bad my daddy looked at me and hurt
    I just know the one thing he'd want me to do
    Never have to go through what he went through

    Daddy, I survive this because of you.

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    Re: How Bad He Hurt

    That was such a great poem. It's all I could do to keep from crying. It was sad how the dad was so sick he knew he had to leave his only child behind to face her abusive mom. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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    Re: How Bad He Hurt

    A meaningful poem indeed, for some odd reason I happened to click on this one when I usually don't read poems at all.

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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    Re: How Bad He Hurt

    You executed this poem beautifully! I actually sat done and read it. I'd just like to see stanzas.
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    Re: How Bad He Hurt

    This poem made my emo self come out, nice poem.

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