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    Otaku xxoxx is off to a good start xxoxx's Avatar
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    How come I'm alone?

    How come I'm alone?
    How come no one likes me?
    I wish I knew the answers
    I wish I knew how to fix it
    I wonder what's wrong
    day in and day out
    what do I need to do different?
    How do I need to act?
    Should I be someone else?
    Or should I just give up?
    But that's not my nature
    I'm a fighter
    not a snail that crawls into my shell
    How come I want to hide?
    How come I want to run?
    I want to get away,
    far away from here
    where no one knows me
    and no one will judge me
    Is there such a place?
    I don't think there is
    but one can always hope
    I sit here alone in the night
    wondering what is wrong with me
    no one ever cares nor will they ever
    there's a hole in my heart waiting to be filled
    I fight back the tears
    hoping no one will notice
    while at the same time I wish they would
    Why doesn't anyone notice?
    Why can't they see me for me?
    And not some rumor that everyone believes
    do I need to change? Should I change?
    I used to think not
    but now I'm not so sure
    they all rush past acting like I don't exist
    maybe I don't
    maybe I don't allow myself to
    What do I need to do to make you notice?
    Just once, one time
    I want to feel like I belong
    my heart is empty and it waits
    for how long I ask...
    a year? A month? Tomorrow?
    To me it seems like an eternity

    Foolish beating

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    Re: How come I'm alone?

    Hmmm.... Haven't you borrowed my brain when writing this? It just says everything I feel- every line could be about me (ok, I could never write it as you do..)!!!!

    A really nice work!!! I really hope to see more and I hope you find your place... *sigh* and I hope I do good in London too... A new chance... hope I don't spoil it... ~.~

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: How come I'm alone?

    we have mabye the same brain ...huh ...
    Thanks a lot ...I glad that you like it ...and you can shere me this poem ..
    opps you spoil ...no no ...I hope not ...

    Foolish beating

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