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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia
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![]() ![]() Credits: 273 | How To Disapear Completetly And Never Be Seen Again *NOTE: This poem has NOTHING to do with my life! lol Like the colourful birds I see soaring in the blue, Is tat me? Can i fly away and forget everything? If tat were me, would I ever break free from my misery? Will I escape from the nightmare I am living? I always saw myself as the person who was hated I never tried to make friends I hated going out in public I hated myself I hated everyone around me I was stupid I have beautiful wings I am gliding gracefully beyond the tallest trees in a forest My elegant wings swaying in the air like a windmill as sureal as it seems My face brushes against the clouds Who am I? It cant be me I dont belive it Is this real? I pull myself awake to realize it was all merely a dream an illusion. fake. i was wrong. I was wrong to ever think i would be free I was wrong to fall asleep every night pretending everything was fine My thoughts are racing to find a way to end it all to break free of my discomfort I loose my hopes every split second falling away like a petal from a flower I forgive myself for ever thinking i was right because of this, i will always dream the impossible.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 265 | Re: How To Disapear Completetly And Never Be Seen Again It would seem more serious in the beginning if you spelled it that like "that" instead of like "tat". Also, you made a few spelling and gramatical errors. But... I did enjoy it. It was very nice. ^_^
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