How do I Atone?
Lying in the warm sand of the ocean,
Tears fell down on the ashen-colored face.
A whirl of painful memories dominates,
As the heart is stabbed with regrets.
How do i atone for the sins i committed?
Many nights i lie wide awake and wander;
Sins are like the stars in the night sky,
Illuminating my painful guilt as time goes by.
How i really wished that these sins leave me be,
To cease the hunt for my repressed thoughts!
I long to live a quiet life,
Not hell, eternal strife!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Ooooh, poems like this send shivers to me. And yet, I can only relate to pieces. See, I wish for solitude as well. And at times I feel Im cursed to live in strife and anguish. Only, I cant figure out why. Im unsure of what sin I may have commited that would make me deserve this. But on the other hand, perhaps its the fact that I dunno what I've done... that makes it sin.
Anyway, as you may have guessed, this was a thought prevoking work. Keep it up.
... Not Ever Again...
Thanks Peach_follows for your sharing and comments. ^^
>In times, the one who committed the sin is the only one who can atone for it... In every sin... there is a specific consequence... In every crime that is committed that resulted into sin, has a punishment to face.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
this poem really hits me its a great piece of work i love it.
Hope to see more like this in the near future as this is one great poem, so do some more.
@aeonking: Thank you for your comment and for liking this poem that i wrote. ^^
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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