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    Re: How do you...

    Eh... I'm kinda waffling on this poem. A part of me really likes it, but the repetiveness of it kinda throws me off.

    I like that you're asking deep questions and what not, but I just don't understand the point of repeating yourself. And I really don't get why you couldn't come up with some more original questions.

    Don't get me wrong, I'm not dissin' ya; I just think that your word play could use some work.


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    Re: How do you...

    I like what you were getting at with this poem. I personally enjoyed the repitition. There were a few things, though . . . "How do you surpass,
    Which cannot be surpassed," ought to (grammatically) be "How do you surpass what cannot be surpassed,"

    "How do you rest,
    Without needing rest." <-- Confused me a bit

    "How can u pass a test,
    Without being tested." <-- as did this

    My opinion is that the poem should end:

    I ask you again..

    how do you.....
    how do you.....

    But I did like it!

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