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    How fairs

    How fairs the never ending, but yet short lived path of life my dear friend? I wish you the best of your fortunes and dreams, and the least of your worries and nightmares. Tell all of old and young that I send my greetings. Remember those that dwell in darkness hear nothing but lies, and feel nothing but pain. Those that dwell in light hear nothing but truth, and feel nothing but happines. Be assured that even the darkest of tunnels have a exit where light is to be found. Searcher far and long and you will find a place where you can sew your seeds for all time. Reads this not with confusion, but with logic, and you will find the answers which you desire.

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    Re: How fairs

    I like what you say.. but.. it's not really in a poem format.. at least not in my opinion.. Maybe you should try it like this... but if you don't that's alright, it's your choice and i'm not going to tell you what you should and shouldn't do.

    How fairs the never ending,
    but yet short lived path of life my dear friend?
    I wish you the best of your fortunes and dreams,
    and the least of your worries and nightmares.
    Tell all of old and young that I send my greetings.
    Remember those that dwell in darkness hear nothing but lies,
    and feel nothing but pain.
    Those that dwell in light hear nothing but truth,
    and feel nothing but happines.
    Be assured that even the darkest of tunnels have a exit where light is to be found.
    Searcher far and long
    you will find a place where you can sew your seeds for all time.
    Reads this not with confusion,
    but with logic,
    and you will find the answers which you desire.

    Or something like that.. it was just a quick return where you had a comma or period, maybe a and or two.. I like what you write though and look forward to seeing more from you. ^-^

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    Re: How fairs

    I love the deep meaning of the words............
    Very nicely done!!!!!!!!!!!
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