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    How hard...

    How hard to cry …without tears
    How hard to talk …without voice
    How hard to regrets…to sin you didn't make it
    How hard to feel sad…and one asks you why?
    How hard to see the light...Dark
    How hard to see the happiness…Imaginations
    To feel the happiness very far away from you
    How hard to live inside yourself lonely…without friend, partner or lover
    How hard to walk the life path lonely…without hand takes you to right way
    How hard to say Goodbye…to someone you put him\her deep inside your heart
    How hard to see the one you love…is happy with someone else
    But think in this…
    How hard to live …only for waiting to die

    Foolish beating

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    Re: How hard...

    UU... been long since I last read any poems.. sheesh..

    Hmm.. this is quite a simple poem... but the repeating of the same words... maybe it's a good thing.. but to me.. its not.. :/ and the way when u read this poem makes you read it faster... o.O for a sad poem... its better if it made the reader linger longer and read slower in the pace... do something good on the wording... ^^

    keep it up

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    I really love your poem! but I am a simple guy. Your poem describes how I feel whenever something bad has happened to me with one of my friends or girlfriends! Its so sad but yet it makes me feel so good to know someone else can feel like me! Great Poem!

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