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I try so hard to please you,
But everything I do
Just makes a bigger mess of things,
And sometimes I hurt you.
I want to do my best with you.
Instead I do my worst.
The things I shouldn't bother with
I manage to put first.
I guess that I just care too much, Whenever you are near.
Although you're always gentle
So there's nothing there to fear,
But since you mean so much to me
I guess I'll always try,
But botch up everything instead
Until the day I die.
this is how heart brake makes me feel :(:
The z at the end of "feelz"... almost prevented me from wanting to read this.
Im glad I decided to go with my instinct and read it anyway.
This was really good. Not at all what I expected.... Most the time you see a poem about heart break... and its all about someone being a victim of sorts. But here, you've twisted your response to heart break. To where YOU become the one to cause pain. Interesting.
Despair without a doubt no hair,
a stumbling vomit indeed here shared,
Contemplation led this Macgyver nowhere,
Left only with a pale blank stare,