how heart brake feelz I try so hard to please you,
But everything I do
Just makes a bigger mess of things,
And sometimes I hurt you.
I want to do my best with you.
Instead I do my worst.
The things I shouldn't bother with
I manage to put first.
I guess that I just care too much, Whenever you are near.
Although you're always gentle
So there's nothing there to fear,
But since you mean so much to me
I guess I'll always try,
But botch up everything instead
Until the day I die.
this is how heart brake makes me feel
The z at the end of "feelz"... almost prevented me from wanting to read this.
Im glad I decided to go with my instinct and read it anyway.
This was really good. Not at all what I expected.... Most the time you see a poem about heart break... and its all about someone being a victim of sorts. But here, you've twisted your response to heart break. To where YOU become the one to cause pain. Interesting.
... Not Ever Again...
!jveli3 (Nov 11, 2008)
Despair without a doubt no hair,
a stumbling vomit indeed here shared,
Contemplation led this Macgyver nowhere,
Left only with a pale blank stare,
o~Piggy-san~o
!jveli3 (Nov 12, 2008)
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