Punctuation, Capitalization, and spelling needs to be worked on. ^^
well this poem i made for some one and yeah i hoep u like it and yeah ^_^.
how it hurts to see you go,
the pain is unverable and it
brakes my heart,
the tears dont stop,
how many moons until
i see u again, how many
seconds, minutes how many
days, how i want to see you,
to hear you, to feel you presence,
i cant stop you nor i will try, i cant
give you anything, only what i feel,
you are free and u make your own
road, and i alone wait,
who i wish to be able to move time
until i am with you, and to stop it
when i have you,
how i wish that my road
walks with yours,
how it hurts to see you go,
but dont you forget about me
even i am just a fragment of your
memory....
death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
by me ^_^.
Punctuation, Capitalization, and spelling needs to be worked on. ^^
Seduced by Flesh
It was a nice poem, but you forgot to use capitalization, punctuation and spelling.
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