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    This is How I Disappear.

    Something random,

    This is How I Disappear

    I just don't care anymore,
    Your accusations and dissapointments.
    Do I mean anything to you?
    DId you ever care to think.

    I don't need an answer,
    because your eyes tell me all.
    I don't need a lecture,
    I'm not as helpless as you think.

    And for just a moment,
    I almost spoke someone elses words,
    to please you, to please you.
    but a lie isn't love, though love hurts,

    And as much as it hurts,
    truth will ease your pain,
    as I slip away into the world,
    searching for myself.

    And don't worry,
    freedom moves me on,
    and on I go happy, untill tied down.
    free and free and free.

    I know you feel this is against you,
    and I know you may not understand.
    But your suffocating and squeezing me,
    when fresh air is all I need.

    Oh the breath of air I will take,
    the first of many to only return.
    back to your cages and chains,
    your suffocation and restraint

    But for now I dissappear,
    gone forever so you can't worry,
    for I know you loved me,
    and will always tell my story.
    Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23

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    Re: This is How I Disappear.

    Your poem was verry good. Freedom is always a good thing to have.

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    Re: This is How I Disappear.

    hey thanks.Freedom is what I live by, I'm a free spirit that acts on impulse, which at times is good, but at times not quite so good lol.. any more comments?
    Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23

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    Re: This is How I Disappear.

    Great job, I can relate immensely.. I'll be keeping my eye out for more..
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