how i feel

Dear mother I am lost and the damage has been done.
I’m in love with my old century fix and this needle can’t be wrong,
but I wonder?
Where do we go from here because we’re never coming home?
The sequel to this nightmare lasts forever, forever.


One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
I’m not scared at all, so let’s walk away.
I’m not scared at all, so now walk away.

Dear mother now beyond the grave you’re the soul that wants me.
Front row with a cigarette, you’re the ghost that haunts me,
but I wonder?
I’m too ****ed up to come home,
I swear this heart was made of stone,
I won’t pretend that everything’s alright when it’s not.


One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
I’m not scared at all, so let’s walk away.
I’m not scared at all, so now walk away.

Wake me now drive faster, make me now a disaster,
take me now live after and walk away.2x


Can you design living through hell and back again?
It’s the life that’s killing you walk away friend.
Can you design living through hell and back again?
It’s the life that’s killing you walk away WALK AWAY!!!


One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.

very very good keep up the excellant work

Nice work! Keep it up. I like it! :thumb:

Your pretty face disguised
in a veil of fear
drip with tears
as I gave you one last
kiss before the fall (before the fall)
Hold my hand you're so beautiful
let's escape from this life and end it all
on three we're jumping from this ledge
this buildings tall
I'm sure we'll wake up dead
but I still love her

Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye

A picture perfect attempt at
a quick and painless death
came and meant
something so much more
than all the rest (than all the rest)
Hold my hand and don't forget to breathe
there's nothing left for you
there's nothing left to leave
on three we're jumping from this ledge
this buildings tall
I'm sure we'll wake up dead
but I still love her

Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah and make it last

With these moments we hold dear
(inside my heart)
and the seconds we have left
(inside my heart)
I know you're here inside my heart [2x]

Hold your hand with mine
in this picture perfect light
there's one last chance for us
tonight
I hold your hand with mine
so everything is fine
so say good by now say goodbye
tonight

Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we'll make it last
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye

You got yourself expressive poems, setsuna!!!
those poems gives a clear and descriptive images in my mind.
your poems are filled with intense emotions such as fear and desperation.
but i like the second poem a lot than the first.
all in all, Great job!

Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we'll make it last
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye
yeah we're falling fast
I'll live forever
Say goodbye say goodbye

i love this stanza its the best

here is another one.

She said live young and leave a wake of beauty.
It's all I ever could have asked,
Should have asked from you.
And I won't forget to write you,
When I get there soon.
'Cause you'll be lying dead
From stab wounds to the neck and chest again.

They found you covered up in blood,
Covered head to toe in blood.
Face first in a tale of awkward love.
They found you covered up in blood,
She's bleeding, she's bleeding.

Gone with the stitching in her heart.
Left out a silhouette that just won't
Heal and dying in your arms tonight.

This dream, we die.
Locked away,
With this blood and this knife.
This dream, we die.
Locked away,
With this blood and this knife.

I know it's all just a bad dream now.

So now midnight's here.
You're all alone.
They use this fear.
It's all just a bad dream.
And I can't seem to...
Wake up from this.

Midnight's here.
You're all alone.
They use this fear.
It's all just a bad dream.
And I can't seem to...
Wake up from this.

In my dreams, we die.
With this blood and this knife.
In my dreams, we die.
With this blood and this knife now.

I know it's all just a bad dream now.
(I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
It's all just a bad dream now.
(I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
It's all just a bad dream now.
(I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
I say...

This is the last time,
That I'll ever get to see your face alive.
They found you covered up in blood,
Covered head to toe in blood.
And I know that every day's a new day.
And my dreams will never die.
They found you covered up in blood,
Covered head to toe in blood.

She said live young and leave a wake of beauty.
It's all I ever could have asked,
Should have asked from you.
And I won't forget to write you,
When I get there soon.
'Cause you'll be lying dead from dreaming (nightmares).

So now midnight's here.
You're all alone.
They use this fear.
It's all just a bad dream.
And I can't seem to...
Wake up from this.

Midnight's here.
You're all alone.
They use this fear.
It's all just a bad dream.
And I can't seem to...
Wake up from this.

Midnight's here.
You're all alone.
They use this fear.
It's all just a bad dream.
And I can't seem to...
Wake up from this nightmare

all your poems are intence man you heart must be full of passion for something or your really hurting but these poesm are really passionate the 2and poem and this last one are awesome .is everything ok?