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    how i feel

    Dear mother I am lost and the damage has been done.
    I’m in love with my old century fix and this needle can’t be wrong,
    but I wonder?
    Where do we go from here because we’re never coming home?
    The sequel to this nightmare lasts forever, forever.


    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
    I’m not scared at all, so let’s walk away.
    I’m not scared at all, so now walk away.

    Dear mother now beyond the grave you’re the soul that wants me.
    Front row with a cigarette, you’re the ghost that haunts me,
    but I wonder?
    I’m too ****ed up to come home,
    I swear this heart was made of stone,
    I won’t pretend that everything’s alright when it’s not.


    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
    I’m not scared at all, so let’s walk away.
    I’m not scared at all, so now walk away.

    Wake me now drive faster, make me now a disaster,
    take me now live after and walk away.2x


    Can you design living through hell and back again?
    It’s the life that’s killing you walk away friend.
    Can you design living through hell and back again?
    It’s the life that’s killing you walk away WALK AWAY!!!


    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.
    One last goodnight, with this painted picture in our minds the voice inside that sings tonight.

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    Re: how i feel

    very very good keep up the excellant work


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: how i feel

    Nice work! Keep it up. I like it!

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    Re: how i feel

    Your pretty face disguised
    in a veil of fear
    drip with tears
    as I gave you one last
    kiss before the fall (before the fall)
    Hold my hand you're so beautiful
    let's escape from this life and end it all
    on three we're jumping from this ledge
    this buildings tall
    I'm sure we'll wake up dead
    but I still love her

    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye

    A picture perfect attempt at
    a quick and painless death
    came and meant
    something so much more
    than all the rest (than all the rest)
    Hold my hand and don't forget to breathe
    there's nothing left for you
    there's nothing left to leave
    on three we're jumping from this ledge
    this buildings tall
    I'm sure we'll wake up dead
    but I still love her

    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah and make it last

    With these moments we hold dear
    (inside my heart)
    and the seconds we have left
    (inside my heart)
    I know you're here inside my heart [2x]

    Hold your hand with mine
    in this picture perfect light
    there's one last chance for us
    tonight
    I hold your hand with mine
    so everything is fine
    so say good by now say goodbye
    tonight

    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we'll make it last
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye

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    Re: how i feel

    You got yourself expressive poems, setsuna!!!
    those poems gives a clear and descriptive images in my mind.
    your poems are filled with intense emotions such as fear and desperation.
    but i like the second poem a lot than the first.
    all in all, Great job!

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: how i feel

    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we'll make it last
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye
    yeah we're falling fast
    I'll live forever
    Say goodbye say goodbye


    i love this stanza its the best

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    Re: how i feel

    here is another one.

    She said live young and leave a wake of beauty.
    It's all I ever could have asked,
    Should have asked from you.
    And I won't forget to write you,
    When I get there soon.
    'Cause you'll be lying dead
    From stab wounds to the neck and chest again.

    They found you covered up in blood,
    Covered head to toe in blood.
    Face first in a tale of awkward love.
    They found you covered up in blood,
    She's bleeding, she's bleeding.

    Gone with the stitching in her heart.
    Left out a silhouette that just won't
    Heal and dying in your arms tonight.

    This dream, we die.
    Locked away,
    With this blood and this knife.
    This dream, we die.
    Locked away,
    With this blood and this knife.

    I know it's all just a bad dream now.

    So now midnight's here.
    You're all alone.
    They use this fear.
    It's all just a bad dream.
    And I can't seem to...
    Wake up from this.

    Midnight's here.
    You're all alone.
    They use this fear.
    It's all just a bad dream.
    And I can't seem to...
    Wake up from this.

    In my dreams, we die.
    With this blood and this knife.
    In my dreams, we die.
    With this blood and this knife now.

    I know it's all just a bad dream now.
    (I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
    It's all just a bad dream now.
    (I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
    It's all just a bad dream now.
    (I know it's all just a bad dream now.)
    I say...

    This is the last time,
    That I'll ever get to see your face alive.
    They found you covered up in blood,
    Covered head to toe in blood.
    And I know that every day's a new day.
    And my dreams will never die.
    They found you covered up in blood,
    Covered head to toe in blood.

    She said live young and leave a wake of beauty.
    It's all I ever could have asked,
    Should have asked from you.
    And I won't forget to write you,
    When I get there soon.
    'Cause you'll be lying dead from dreaming (nightmares).

    So now midnight's here.
    You're all alone.
    They use this fear.
    It's all just a bad dream.
    And I can't seem to...
    Wake up from this.

    Midnight's here.
    You're all alone.
    They use this fear.
    It's all just a bad dream.
    And I can't seem to...
    Wake up from this.

    Midnight's here.
    You're all alone.
    They use this fear.
    It's all just a bad dream.
    And I can't seem to...
    Wake up from this nightmare

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    Re: how i feel

    all your poems are intence man you heart must be full of passion for something or your really hurting but these poesm are really passionate the 2and poem and this last one are awesome .is everything ok?
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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