LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With Quoteo.o well its makes sence, and its truthful~
^_^ Even thou short again.
They could always be put into lil cards~
^_^ Neat~
what can i do to show you how i feel
you have never said hello or good bye
but you have seen me
but not as the peson as you see me in the hall
or on the street
but if i could just get nere to you
you could get to know the real me
o.o well its makes sence, and its truthful~
^_^ Even thou short again.
They could always be put into lil cards~
^_^ Neat~
thank you both im glad u liked it ^_^
Short and simple, straight to the point, sweet poem and it looks like you want him to know your feelings ^^ Keep it up!
thank you sooo much ^_^ and thats kinda what its about ^_^
Did you try to implement what I said, Equinn? Looks not. [] Anyways, I find this poem toothsome. Keep it up. Also, Equinn, think of giving your poems good titles.
ok thanks kedar ^_^
i will try k ^_^
Same like others, it's short and simple. Wrong spellings but I can still understand what I'm reading. Not bad *smile*
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks