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    How I Feel

    I feel a dull ache in my chest
    A warmth in my belly

    My head feels spinny
    When I stand I get dizzy

    Sensory overload
    Muscle fatigue

    Then its all gone
    Disspeared in an instant

    You walked into the room
    My world stoppped spinning

    I find myself again
    I'm in your arms

    I'm where I belong
    And that is where I will stay

    Until my dying day
    Or until you leave me

    I hope that day never comes
    But to me my love our days will never be done

    No longer sick and weak
    I feel powerful and strong again

    This is how I feel

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: How I Feel

    So much feelings!!!! Thats what I love about it!!! It has different emotions in it well to me but it's just so cool!!!
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    Re: How I Feel

    I love this poem... it's sad and, at the same time, it's happy...
    Adore it and wish I had someone who'd make me feel like that...
    I like every single thing about this poem- it's easy and interesting to read, has an interesting thought in it, it's very lovely, full of feelings... I enjoyed reading it soooo much!
    Keep up the good work posting poems like this one!

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    Re: How I Feel

    You guys are why I post poems. Well other than to express my love and devotion. Thanks for your undying support.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: How I Feel

    this poem sets a great mood. I really feel the vibe! great emotion as well. I cant wait to read your next one!
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    Re: How I Feel

    Really good job Nevosh I like it more then any of the ones I posted. you are really good.
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    Re: How I Feel

    I like it alot its full of your feelings and emotion i say.I really liked reading it i dident see eny thing wrong with it ,Can't wait to your next one.
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