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    How i Feel

    i see you light the sky with your light
    and my eyes your lands and seas ..

    my steps lost it way towered you
    to come close to you to feel your breath ..

    you are the moonlight ray of my close night
    i missed your seas of silent
    and i missed my pride for your arrogance ... =^_^=
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    Re: How i Feel

    Excellent poem. It is very much like Langston Hughes. I could memorize this if I wanted to. Only thing I would change up is the sixths word of the first line of the second stanza. I would change the word from "towered" to "toward." That would be more powerful.

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    Re: How i Feel

    XD thank you very much for your nice words XD ... i wrote this poem when i was watching a different romance movies lol XD when after every movie a word or a line XD Nu~ ... =^_^=
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frozen Rose View Post
    i see you light the sky with your light
    and my eyes your lands and seas ..

    my steps lost it way towered you
    to come close to you to feel your breath ..

    you are the moonlight ray of my close night
    i missed your seas of silent
    and i missed my pride for your arrogance ... =^_^=
    i know how you feel i have been through it many times before. it's too hard to explain though lol!
    im angel but, i could be dark and mysterious at times , so boys watch out meow im fast and mean!

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    Re: How i Feel

    Quote Originally Posted by angel5431 View Post
    i know how you feel i have been through it many times before. it's too hard to explain though lol!
    Thank you XD finally someone understand me lol JK ... i can't say i have been through is many times i think i have been through it two times X3 , and yeah XD it is too hard to explain even this words were nothing compared to how we feel ... =^_^=
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