i see you light the sky with your light
and my eyes your lands and seas ..
my steps lost it way towered you
to come close to you to feel your breath ..
you are the moonlight ray of my close night
i missed your seas of silent
and i missed my pride for your arrogance ... =^_^=
♥♥♥My Dreams Become Like The Rainbow♥♥♥
Love Like the Wind You Can't See It But You Can Feel It
Excellent poem. It is very much like Langston Hughes. I could memorize this if I wanted to. Only thing I would change up is the sixths word of the first line of the second stanza. I would change the word from "towered" to "toward." That would be more powerful.
Frozen Rose (Aug 19, 2009)
XD thank you very much for your nice words XD ... i wrote this poem when i was watching a different romance movies lol XD when after every movie a word or a line XD Nu~ ... =^_^=
♥♥♥My Dreams Become Like The Rainbow♥♥♥
Love Like the Wind You Can't See It But You Can Feel It
Re: How i Feel i know how you feel i have been through it many times before. it's too hard to explain though lol!Originally Posted by Frozen Rose
im angel but, i could be dark and mysterious at times , so boys watch out meow im fast and mean!
Thank you XD finally someone understand me lol JK ... i can't say i have been through is many times i think i have been through it two times X3 , and yeah XD it is too hard to explain even this words were nothing compared to how we feeli know how you feel i have been through it many times before. it's too hard to explain though lol!... =^_^=
♥♥♥My Dreams Become Like The Rainbow♥♥♥
Love Like the Wind You Can't See It But You Can Feel It
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